Hi, Zoey this is Skyla from Rata class maybe next time you can put in less "it means" and instead you can write "if someone has no food" because you said if some has no food. I like at the end when the words fade away good bye.
You have some good ideas here Skyla. I like that you will look after someone if they are sick. Good work.Next time, try to write in one bold colour as I found some of your words hard to read.
Hi, Zoey this is Skyla from Rata class maybe next time you can put in less "it means" and instead you can write "if someone has no food" because you said if some has no food. I like at the end when the words fade away good bye.
ReplyDeleteYou have some good ideas here Skyla. I like that you will look after someone if they are sick. Good work.Next time, try to write in one bold colour as I found some of your words hard to read.
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