The Marshmallow Monster!!

For the last 2 weeks we have been working on a story. The story is about a monster that came out of a pond and wanted to have some Marshmallows but instead in the end he burnt a pillow because he thought it was a Marshmallow. Here is my writing.

We are learning to write a narrative.

The Marshmallow- By Zoey and Emalea.

It was a dark and stormy night. There was a monster lurking around in a stinky swamp  “ewwww”

There was a little boy that was walking around in the dark woods and he was all alone and know one was around and he fell  like someone, was watching him.  He just noticed that it was, a full moon and he could hear wolves howling at the full moon.  All of a sudden the ,Marshmallow monster jumped out of the swamp making a huge SPLASH!!! After the little boy heard the Splash he jumped  with, a fright.  Then the gooey stinky monster stared at the little boys yummy packet of marshmallow. Then the little boy gave the  stinky swamp monster gave him the cute, puppy eyes, then the boy chucked him one marshmallow and then, he gave him more and more then  was only one left and then the, marshmallow and chomp he ate the marshmallow then the boy, yelled so hard.“Ahhhhhh help help” But nobody was around to help him. Then the monster shook his head and the boy fell down.  Then he ran and got his pillow and put it on  a stick. After that he throw the pillow out into the frost. After that the boy runs the opposite way of the monster out to the other side of the forest and then the monster tries to roast the marshmallow. When he tries to roast the pillow i sent up into flames and then it turned into ashes.  After the  pillow went into ashes the Monster started crying.

              THE END!!

Next time I am going to try and think more about what happened in the video.

If you want me to add the video just say in the comments down below.