Hi Zoey! Very good I love how clear it is but it does have a little bit of an acsent. I like how you chose one main topic and added a whole lot of facts into it. I didnt even knwo some of those facts you said so next time I will be able to know. Maybe you could do vokis for other planets aswell! Keep up the FANTASTIC work!!!! Blog ya lata!!!!
Kia ora Zoey! Ashrita here!! Well done I really enjoyed learning these facts about Saturn. I like the fact where you wrote 'Saturn's rings are made out of ice', Maybe next time you could write in what book you're reading so the audience can expect what your gonna tell them. Anyways that's all from me bye!
Hi Zoey Milan here, This was really cool and that you have so well the facts that you taught me that was cool and that I didn't really know it but it was so cool that you had a horse talk and that her ascent was Irish. With her talking it was really fast and quick that could only here some words n the sentence. Catch you later bye.
Hi Zoey!
ReplyDeleteVery good I love how clear it is but it does have a little bit of an acsent. I like how you chose one main topic and added a whole lot of facts into it. I didnt even knwo some of those facts you said so next time I will be able to know. Maybe you could do vokis for other planets aswell!
Keep up the FANTASTIC work!!!!
Blog ya lata!!!!
Kia ora Zoey!
ReplyDeleteAshrita here!!
Well done I really enjoyed learning these facts about Saturn.
I like the fact where you wrote 'Saturn's rings are made out of ice', Maybe next time you could write in what book you're reading
so the audience can expect what your gonna tell them.
Anyways that's all from me bye!
Hi Zoey Milan here,
ReplyDeleteThis was really cool and that you have so well the facts that you taught me that was cool and that I didn't really know it but it was so cool that you had a horse talk and that her ascent was Irish. With her talking it was really fast and quick that could only here some words n the sentence. Catch you later bye.
Hi Zoey, Tobey here.
ReplyDeleteThis is really great and is very interesting.
Next time add more info.
BYE!