Writing

A few weeks ago we did ten minutes and fifteen minutes writing and I thought that I would share some of it with you. Just so you know it isn't finished because I am showing you how much I can write in 15 minutes.

Suddenly I woke up with a burst of excitement!!! Today was the day… the day I get a puppy, I was so excited because I had been waiting for months and months, and today was the day of the month the one day that I had been waiting for. So I quickly got out of bed and zoomed to my wardrobe and found this really pretty purple and black dress. Once I was dressed I went straight to the kitchen grabbed some toast and buttered it and put some jam on it and then ate it as fast as possible and then I ran to my Dad and asked “ Are we going to go to the pet shop to get my puppy now??” and my Dad replied “Yes so hop in the car and we’ll get going.” So I hopped into the car and clipped myself in and my Dad clipped my little brother Thomas in and then my Dad hopped in started the car. Chitter Chitter Boom!!! oh no… the car wouldn’t start!! I was so angry and so so upset because I had waited and waited for this day and now the car won’t start but after a little while I remembered that we could just walk or bike to the pet shop since we are only a block away from the pet shop. So I told my Dad and he said “ Wow!! Why didn’t I think of that.” So then I grabbed my bike and Thomas’s bike and my Dad grabbed his bike and all of our helmets and we started biking and by the time I got there it was lunch so we quickly locked our bikes up and went inside. We had a look at all the dogs, there were and the one I really liked was the golden retriever puppy and she was a female to… and it was all I want was a female puppy but then I wondered how we were going to get her home and what was I going to name her… then suddenly I remembered that she is small enough to fit in the front basket of my bike and she shouldn’t weigh to much and I thought of some really good names for her and my favourite was Rose and of course she was going to have the same last name as me.

I hope you liked my writing, I still need to improve though.